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liz kohlenberg's avatar

oh I missed this one. so beautifully formed, so moving, so -- you.

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Toni's avatar

I wish I had your talent of using words to create such powerful emotions because all I can say is: "Wow!" What a touching poem that stirs up feelings inside me that, right now, I don't want to deal with. "wow!!"

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Patri Becus's avatar

when my dad passed away I included a screenshot from You don't have to say you love me in the carousel of images announcing his passing ( I should have done more about the damn door)

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Lisa Sockett's avatar

Powerful

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Lily Pond's avatar

"I didn't marry my parents.

No, it's their sorrow

that has become my spouse"

Gut punch! I resonate with this so much! The succinctness of this poem belies the depth of your trauma.

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Imola's avatar

This was just too beautiful for words. And oh, it reads uncomfortably familiar. Thank you!

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Dale Odberg's avatar

Awesome writing Sherman, thank you.

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AMALIA VILLALBA NUÑEZ's avatar

SHERMAN ALEXIE FELICES Y GRACIAS

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Sherman Alexie's avatar

Thank you!

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AMALIA VILLALBA NUÑEZ's avatar

FELICES Y GRACIAS

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Jill's avatar

Hauntingly beautiful and all too relatable.

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Sherman Alexie's avatar

Thank you, Jill

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Rebecca Barry's avatar

I also suspect tornadoes are born from our doubt and fear. Loved, loved, loved this.

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Sherman Alexie's avatar

Thank you, Rebecca.

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Alix's avatar

Thank you Sherman. Thank you

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Sherman Alexie's avatar

Thank you, Alix.

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Jt Smith's avatar

Once again, humanity is rescued by a random thought of opposites. This poem is juxtaposed with some evocative language. As I listen to Celtic music on AccuRadio, I am reminded that calmness is a gift too. Your words soothe the wary heart. We are all wild and innocence in various stages of development.

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Sherman Alexie's avatar

A beautiful response. Thank you.

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Barbara Ward Thall's avatar

Oohhhh. This one hits hard! Devastatingly good.

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Sherman Alexie's avatar

Thank you, Barbara.

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Michael Frank Rhoderick's avatar

so can I never really leave home????

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Sherman Alexie's avatar

With armor on, you can! Maybe!

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Arturo Desimone's avatar

Dear Mr Alexie: a few weeks ago I found some exciting info about an online autofiction course that you were giving. This morning I started searching for it again on Google and Presearch and Submittable to sign up, but I can no longer locate the page, which I was certain I had bookmarked. If it still exists can you or someone please send me the link? To arturo.desimone@gmail.com

Many thanks in advance to you and Substack

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Sherman Alexie's avatar

I'm not teaching that class due to scheduling changes. I'm sorry.

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Arturo Desimone's avatar

Ok, at least I didn't miss a deadline! Hope to be updated if there's another opportunity for an online autofiction workshop!

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Eve Keller's avatar

There is a sweet normal about your words that tickle to the bone.

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Sherman Alexie's avatar

Thank you, Eve. I'm about a 45 degree angle away from normal. Ha!

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