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Carla's avatar

The poem is Articulated your Spirit..Seasons are my spirit i do believe I turn into wolf in October at the Harvest moon and then a Snow princess in Winter xoxo and Summer is the night kiss in breeze of warmth ! 🍁🌖🐺

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John Jordan's avatar

I do live like this.

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Sara Savel's avatar

October is so very much the liminal space of manic-depression tension. Walking on a wire, which way will I fall as the daylight fades? The bed rotting and shopping season beckon like wicked witches in competing gingerbread houses: Choose the sad spell or the mad spell. Are the witches real? Am I real? Am I being watched by ghosts in old photographs? Will candy corn and apple cider prevent gloom smothering me in mid November?

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Sharon's avatar

Great poem. It really resonates with me.

I loved August as a child. It meant lazy, hot summer days playing in the sprinklers, going to the pool, drawing on the tiny front porch in the shade. My birthday and toys.

August has become smoke season. We wanted to get in the car and go away from home, but it isn't right to leave the animals for someone else to evacuate if/when a fire comes to our neighborhood. We're surrounded by hundreds of thousands of acres of kindling.

The smoke drags me down and makes me lazy. It's worse than the heat.

Things have changed. There used to be days of smoke, a week of smoke...now there's a month or more of accumulated days of smoke.

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Monica Beck's avatar

Sherman, I love this poem. Weather affects our mood undoubtedly, and our moods, including their associated emotions are like the weather. I love the December voices, but I am an April-girl.

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Mary Van Pelt's avatar

"...collapsed by the ten feet of December that has accumulated on the roof of your soul." EXCELLENT!

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Kate Bradley's avatar

Stunning ending. Thank you.

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Dan Hess's avatar

This is a gem. Congrats.

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Kathy Morefield's avatar

Time the Weather Vane is a fantastic poem. I will read it many times. Thank you, Sherman, for sharing this poem.

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David A. Westbrook's avatar

Bravo! I especially liked the image of the roof collapsing. That said, somehow (thankfully) your tone seems to me a bit more at rest (because of the solace of poetry?) than the ending of the poem. Anyway, thank you!

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Joan DeMartin's avatar

As always your writing touches me deeply. I also struggle with peace and anger—too angry to be at peace, I believe.

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Janice LeCocq's avatar

The last lines hit hard

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Terry Moisan's avatar

Captured by mood that does not care what season it is. Rest in Autumn.

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Amanda Wald Rachie's avatar

Yes. "... let us praise the calendar's forthcoming turn ..."

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Margaret Ann Silver's avatar

Wow. So powerful.

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Katharina Ray's avatar

You continue to touch my heart.

It is astonishing to me that I can feel the touch of your words so soon after you’ve written them. This is something I never thought I’d experience.

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