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Engine of the heart is singing a dirge.......

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Oh, my heart. Those birds. I want to feel them flutter so much, but I think they’ve perished in my chest along with my heart.

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devastating and beautiful. thank you for sharing

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Thank you, Maegan.

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For Pete’s Sake. First I read this and then listened to you read it. Your words are so magical, moving, original. I am awed by the power of birds, and I, too, am moved to tears. You make me want to become a poet.

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Thank you, Sheila.

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2nd attempt...I've been dealing w/ a Lymes infection and a home move...I've been absent from this forum...and I value it, thank you for the offering to communicate w/ you...

I saw Smoke Signals again recently, a very clear window into Rez life...

then I saw a story about the Museum of Natural History in NYC...it has childrens toys from the massacre at Wooden Knee...what a relic...

In my community there is a Hotchkiss cannon on display...several of those guns were used against the citizens at Wooden Knee...indiscriminately...one liberation movement implies all liberation movements...Jeffrey

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Oh, how so beautiful!!

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Sherman - Your words are beautiful. I go back to your work often. Thank you.

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Thank you, Briana.

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If the air compressor still needs to be fixed, give me a call. I’ll trade my labor for you reading poetry while I work.

When my wife and I were building a house lo so many years ago, I had a friend who wanted to help, but disaster always followed his efforts, so I asked him to read Steinbeck to me and he started with The Pastures of Heaven, and I still remember how Maria and Rosa decided to increase their tortilla business, but I don’t remember what I was doing as he read.

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Hahahahaha. My office toilet won't stop running water. I stared hard at it for several minutes and then called the plumber.

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No greater love has any man than the guy who fixes toilets and the guy in Idaho who delivers beverages all winter on ice and snow covered roads.

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Amen!

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I love the pesky birds.

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I want to apologize for part of my earlier comment, when I said "Let go your father's hand and sleep" - it was presumptuous of me. In reality I was speaking to myself and my own childhood terrors and insomnia, which are of a completely different origin than yours. But - last night I slept. I can't remember the last time I did that. Your words were healing, somehow. I hope that comfort stays with me. Thank you. (If I remember correctly, you had wanted at one time to be a pediatric doctor? Maybe that's part of what you've become!)

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Oh, I didn't take it as anything other than empathy.

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What an amazing poem.

Perfect in every way.

I not only wept,

I sobbed.

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Thank you.

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No one writes like you. Beautiful.

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Thank you, Dorothy.

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Beautiful and touching poem, I could hear the stutter of the engine. Just brilliant!

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Thank you, Diana.

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Beautiful words Sherman. Takes me back to a time I would forget if I could, but will always remember. Bird song can repair one’s soul. That first song just before light has always lifted me up.

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Thank you, Steve.

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The finality of loss. I remember it well from my grandmother's bedside. We never put ourselves back together again, do we?

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No, we don't.

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Thank you for sharing this: it touched my soul.

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Thank you, Linda.

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