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This is great , love rereading it !šŸ’• Iā€™m wondering why you chose to number the lines?

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I wanted to have a marching feel to the story: the march of elephants and the march of soldiers.

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"Nobody ever said that Jesus was funny." This may well be true, but I like to think that he laughed now and then. I like to think of Peter trying to be very serious, and then passing gas, and then Jesus and the disciples couldn't take him seriously for the rest of the day.

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Hahahaha

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Fucking great!

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Thank you, Freddy!

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