"Nobody ever said that Jesus was funny." This may well be true, but I like to think that he laughed now and then. I like to think of Peter trying to be very serious, and then passing gas, and then Jesus and the disciples couldn't take him seriously for the rest of the day.
This is great , love rereading it !💕 I’m wondering why you chose to number the lines?
I wanted to have a marching feel to the story: the march of elephants and the march of soldiers.
"Nobody ever said that Jesus was funny." This may well be true, but I like to think that he laughed now and then. I like to think of Peter trying to be very serious, and then passing gas, and then Jesus and the disciples couldn't take him seriously for the rest of the day.
Hahahaha
Fucking great!
Thank you, Freddy!