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Beautiful. I have included this poem in a course I teach. Is this poem published in any collections yet?

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The delicacy of nature choosing to land when invited is certainly a blessing, a communion.

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Thank you.

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Ahh!! Thanks so much!

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Thank you, Eunice.

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Such simple yet such beautiful words.

I’m fast becoming a fan :)

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Hey, that's very kind. Thank you, Michael.

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Hi Sherman, I am writing you here because I usually show the Bill Moyers interview with you to introduce you to students. I cannot find it now. It used to be on PBS's site, but is no longer. I will look at your website, but can you tell me if it is still available?

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This is so lovely. I have felt that sweet loneliness, too.

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Thank you, Rachel.

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Sometime pigeons that I feed try to fly up and land on me. I cannot say that it makes me comfortable. I guess it is their manner of saying thank you.

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!!!!

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Love the idea of a sweet loneliness.

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"Sweet loneliness" and "good grief" are cousins!

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This is an incredibly beautiful poem, and not just because I love birds, and now, apparently Indians ;)

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Hahahahahahhahaha

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This is glimmering piece!

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Thank you!

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Geometry theorems At Bay

Hope is sometimes gull ible.

French fries are always gulpable.

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Hahahaha

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We had an Anna Hummingbird that claimed the feeder on our back porch for about 4 years. He became very comfortable with us. Many times he would hover within a foot or two of my face for a few seconds, then move to the feeder. Connection to anything wild is so very special. I don't suppose your true name is "He who talks to the winged ones".

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Nope, not my name!

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I’ve never started with the title. I have a bunch of “first lines” jotted down, which I suppose is similar but a title can be so much more then a first line. An excercise for another day!

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Maybe try the Shakespeare title search. Go to this site, think up a random word, search for it, and then look for a title among the results.

https://www.opensourceshakespeare.org

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Excellent, thanks!

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Nice. I hope a bird flies to your open hand soon.

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That would be great!

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Beautiful. I listened after I read it, and realized I hadn't caught there were three bless me's, not just two. And the "bless me again" as a finale makes the whole poem soar. Thank you again and again :)

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Thank you! I like the waterfall effect of splitting the second "bless me" in half with "bless" on one line and "me" on the next line.

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Full of memories of childhood. A fluttering of wings oppressed, two small hearts beating in anticipation and fear of the next moment. This was it then. How different would it be now at old age.

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Thank you for that lovely response.

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