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Pam's avatar

I can’t wait to read what happens next!

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Steve Lovelace's avatar

For the majority of my life I have had a love/hate relationship with blackberries. Either the wild mountain berries or the two non-natives. I have fought the invading vines and picked the delicious fruit for a long time. To make them life threatening is a great twist.

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Kim Barnes's avatar

Love this and can't wait to read the next two acts (hehe)! It would be a great example as part of a workshop exercise on how to turn a situation into a story...

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Sherman Alexie's avatar

Maybe I should turn it into a book?

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Kim Barnes's avatar

I would follow this character anywhere! She's twisty. Slippery. I like that!

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