Another wonderful poetry prompt. When it is my turn to present, we shall see what everyone's path looks like! May I share your poem with the group? We always make sure we write the following: "Used for educational purposes only."
Thank you for putting a tiny bit of current events into your work. I always wonder how we just keep on with our respective art, writing, teaching, and ignore what's happening in the big world outside our own little worlds. This piece perfectly took tiny pieces of outside nausea into our own journeys that we all take in one form or another. Especially speaks to me, as I am facing a challenging move and change of address etc filling out change of address cards nightmare with PO. I second what everyone is saying - so much depth, beauty, humor, soul. Thank you.
This is an exquisite poem. Nothing that the WH says will alter reality. The land, the people—all is as it is. The new, old, ancient no-name land of our selves and the earth.
Another wonderful poetry prompt. When it is my turn to present, we shall see what everyone's path looks like! May I share your poem with the group? We always make sure we write the following: "Used for educational purposes only."
And one more thing
In my nearly 29, 200 years in this dreamland
I for sure took my share of
poorly designed pathways
They beckon with their preponderance and no
lack of company and they work for some people
Gotta take some steps to find out/not so many with age
Listen to the answer to
What do you want to be when you grow up
What an incredible poem! <3
Change of address inside our souls 💚
Wonderful !
Thank you for putting a tiny bit of current events into your work. I always wonder how we just keep on with our respective art, writing, teaching, and ignore what's happening in the big world outside our own little worlds. This piece perfectly took tiny pieces of outside nausea into our own journeys that we all take in one form or another. Especially speaks to me, as I am facing a challenging move and change of address etc filling out change of address cards nightmare with PO. I second what everyone is saying - so much depth, beauty, humor, soul. Thank you.
so right on
Nicely read.
"...We can
only fill out our change of address
cards—the ones inside our souls—
and follow the path that we make next."
The last line opened a path into my heart. Thank you, Sherman
Wonderful!
And again, I so appreciate the heart in this poem, but also the humour. So much depth. So much beauty.
Lovely!
Beautifully written. Thank-you!
This is an exquisite poem. Nothing that the WH says will alter reality. The land, the people—all is as it is. The new, old, ancient no-name land of our selves and the earth.
Great
That was supposed to say LOVELY poem!