Again, thank you!! I am behind in my emails. Since this is a night of insomnia, I am not fussing about not sleeping; I am enjoying catching up with your beautiful creations.
Maybe he wanted a change to the life he saw after graduation. Get out in the darkness, float downstream a bit, swim to shore, circle back and listen, hidden, to his classmates until all had left. Walk to the highway, hitch a ride, and now he's retired on a beach in Kauai.
This story has stayed with me. I think it's because, although the adults are still stunned and confused, it's the child's clarity that "rescues" us all. Such a clear sweet voice of that little girl! 🙏 Thanks for another stunner!
Maybe Bobby didn’t drown. Maybe he swam that river, and then just kept swimming. Maybe his warrior name is Big Fish, and he’s still swimming, and telling big stories.
That was really powerful. I've always been terrified of drowning. It's strange, because I was on swim team in high school and was a lifeguard in my late teens and early 20s. Ten years ago I spent ten days in the Bahamas swimming with dolphins. The water is an alien world that is inhospitable to human life, yet so alluring and freeing when you're in it.
Bring Us to the River
Again, thank you!! I am behind in my emails. Since this is a night of insomnia, I am not fussing about not sleeping; I am enjoying catching up with your beautiful creations.
Your story reminded me that it's June. A sad month for some kids of any color. Could it be because, for the first time, they can't see a path forward?
Wow. Haunting and beautiful and concise.
Maybe he wanted a change to the life he saw after graduation. Get out in the darkness, float downstream a bit, swim to shore, circle back and listen, hidden, to his classmates until all had left. Walk to the highway, hitch a ride, and now he's retired on a beach in Kauai.
This story has stayed with me. I think it's because, although the adults are still stunned and confused, it's the child's clarity that "rescues" us all. Such a clear sweet voice of that little girl! 🙏 Thanks for another stunner!
Sometimes, risky behavior is caused by pain one does not understand.
Maybe he almost died on purpose ... wow
Great job, Sherman! I enjoyed your narration and the story. Looking forward to following your work.
Kids really can see the obvious that is often lost to us "Grown Ups".
Maybe Bobby didn’t drown. Maybe he swam that river, and then just kept swimming. Maybe his warrior name is Big Fish, and he’s still swimming, and telling big stories.
Moving!
"The peer pressure to be heroes riding horses all named Grief." Damn.
This is gorgeous.
How do you do that, man? Kicked my guts out from a couple thousand miles away. Thank you, brother.
That was really powerful. I've always been terrified of drowning. It's strange, because I was on swim team in high school and was a lifeguard in my late teens and early 20s. Ten years ago I spent ten days in the Bahamas swimming with dolphins. The water is an alien world that is inhospitable to human life, yet so alluring and freeing when you're in it.