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Robert Price's avatar

Distillness Goest Hard

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Tina Smith's avatar

This quartet of poems......superb.

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Patricia Andrews (WA)'s avatar

That black box is what I think we all hold on to. It is filled with memories we do not wish to lose. If we ever open the lid on that box and expose our memories to the light of day, they will all flit away into the world to be forgotten.

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Brian Huseland's avatar

The shoes... untying the knots the last time. oh man that gets me.

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Jennifer Lauck's avatar

Love love love!

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LeighK's avatar

Oh boy - meant “even better read together”- is it allergies or is it age? I’m claiming allergies

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LeighK's avatar

Love this collection of 4 - singular poems but even together read together. And thank you again for the fabulous Zoom read.

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Barb Bernhardt's avatar

I like to wear old shoes on my travels and then leave them in that foreign place in case they can go on walking there when I can't be there

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Janice LeCocq's avatar

Black Box: so on point. I have been grieving the loss of most of the few friends I’ve had…always some rationale but it doesn’t stop the pain.

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Kathy Morefield's avatar

I love the poems today especially Lincoln County. It resonates with me in my 80th year of life.

And the reading last night was wonderful. Your short story is excellent. Thank you for the invitation.

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Joan Livingston's avatar

Love this part ... truth in poetry.

Someday, you'll forget those

who've forgotten you.

Or maybe you won't.

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Tori's avatar

Cobbler ❤️

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Ewan MacTavish's avatar

I’m glad to see I’m not the only person who gets emotional over having to retire shoes. No one is ever there for you like a good pair of shoes. And then one day when they lose their use, they just become trash. A truly thankless relationship. There’s a street in my city, famous for having hanging shoes on many of the trees and powerlines. My last two pairs I’ve gone to that street, tied my laces together, and thrown shoes up onto a tree until they hanged. I guess people were not used to seeing a grown man do this, so I got some looks. But I feel like I gave my shoes the burial the funeral they deserved.

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Switter’s World's avatar

You are welcome to a spot in my inbox any day, but especially today, because your poems hit a target.

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Lea Sinclair's avatar

Eventually, you begin

to understand that some

of the people you loved

didn't love you back

This…a hard-scrabbled truth 😔

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Lor's avatar

The Cobbler~ I love how an inanimate object can tell a story, have a heart.

And be mourned at it’s passing.

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